2007年12月大学英语四级写作（四）

　六.Post-writing:

　　第一步集中在语法上：

　　1) 每个句子是否都有谓语动词;

　　2) 动词的时态和语态;

　　3) 主谓搭配是否恰当;

　　4) 代词与其指代的事物是否一致;

　　5) 标点符号。

　　第二步在拼写上

　　常见错误举例：

　　1) 无主语

　　(1) After graduated from university, I began to work in a company.

　　(2) Do you know why must protect our environment?

　　(3) Have you seen a man without enough food but had a healthy body?

　　2) 无主谓结构

　　(1) For another reason. When we have a vacation, it will be convenient to ride a bike.

　　(2) Lived in the country, no loud noise, no dirty air, but quiet and fresh.

　　3) 无连接词

　　(1) But a person has not enough food, he will not have a healthy body.

　　(2) China is a developing country, most people cannot afford a car yet.

　　4) 主语使用错误

　　(1) Rich doesn’t mean a happy life.

　　(2) Without a friend will feel alone.

　　(3) However, making friends should be careful.

　　5) “there be”用法错误

　　(1) There are many students read books in the classroom.

　　(2) There are few person can afford a car in our country.

　　(3) There are many things must be done to deal with energy crisis.

　　6) 举例用法错误

　　(1) We should take some sports. For example, football, basketball and so on.

　　7) 不完全句

　　(1) Nowadays, if you want to find a job. Then you must pass the College English Test.

　　8) 分词使用错误

　　(1) Comparing with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.

　　(2) Looking at from above, this picture gives us an image of a lion.

　　9)单词用法错误(冠词、代词、形容词、副词等)