英语四级:论赞扬(On Praise)

论赞扬(On Praise)
1、人们都喜欢赞扬；
2、但人们却很少得到赞扬；
3、我们应该……
[范文]
    Everyone wants to be appreciated and praised by others for what they do and what they say. For instance, children want to be praised by their parents. Students want to be praised by their teachers. Employees want to be praised by their employers. It seems that praise is like sunlight to us, we can't flower and grow without it.
    But it is a pity that while most of us are only too ready to blow the cold wind of harsh criticism on others, we are somehow reluctant to give people around us the warm sunshine of praise. For example, most mothers are always not satisfied with the progress their children made at school Most teachers always drown their students compositions in critical red ink, instead of commenting favorably on them. Most employersarealways criticalabout what their employees have done instead of giving encouragement to them. produces may be great. So, let's be alert to the small excellence around us and comment on them. We will not only bring joy into other people's lives, but also, very often, add happiness to our own.
[作文评论]
    文章一开始的主题句应点明主题，接着应用具体例子支持，即无论是谁，比如孩子、学生、雇员都希望得到赞扬。该段的结尾句可用一个优美的比喻：赞扬犹如阳光，有了它，万物才能茁壮成长；第二段分析现状，可通过举例说明人们在日常生活中不但不赞扬，反而常批评的做法；最后一段指出赞扬别人并非很难，只要用心去发现，努力去赞扬发生在生活中的值得赞扬的事，一个精彩的世界就会呈现在你我的面前。